1.                  Close on the Cleaner Close sign

MVO: Last week on Cleaner Close

2.                  Pat striding purposefully across the Close

MVO: And Pat’s convinced she’s finally caught Mick with Jackie Strong.

3.         Pat storms into Jackie’s bedroom:

            “Where’s Mick?”

4.         Jackie is flustered:

“Mick?”

5.                  Pat produces the Daz

“This is new limited edition Daz Citrus Blast, Jackie.”

6.                  Close on the Daz pack in Pat’s hand

7.                  Jackie looks at Pat, curious and cautious

“You alright Pat?”

8.                  Pat moves about, sniffs the air.

“New Daz tablets with a ….. sniff….

9.                  She sniffs in a slightly threatening way.

…beautiful… (sniff) … fresh … (sniff)…

10.                  Jackie is a bit freaked by Pat’s behaviour.

…. unmistakable …(sniff)… citrus…

11.                  Close on pat’s twitching nose

….(sniff)….fragrance…”

12.                  Close on Pat, reveal Mick from behind.

“Out you come Mick.”

“Sorry babe”

13.                  Close on Mick’s boxers, with a defeated Jackie in background.

            “PAT: Brilliant white aren’t they Jack…?

14.                  Close on Pat – see Mick behind.

(now sarcastically) or hadn’t you noticed?.”

15.                  Jackie throws her sheets in a tantrum – freeze

              MVO: So, will new Daz Citrus Blast be
              fizzing through Jackie’s sheets?

16.               Pat strides down the Close to Camera. She looks different, she’s radiating from the encounter. It’s an heroic shot. Whatever she’s feeling, we’re happy for her. In the distant background we can see the shape of Mick running after her. He’s still in his boxers, carrying his clothes in a bundle.

MVO: Will Mick’s fragrant boxers be back between Pat’s?”